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For you book critics out there, or book afictionados
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Admin  Joined: Wed May 22, 2013 9:02 am Posts: 166 Location: Portugal 
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 For you book critics out there, or book afictionadosI've been writting a novel, its been a project i've been dedicating myself to recently, its a book called Civil Employee 404. here's the description
Jack Hughes, 19 years old, is a young adult in college who suffers from a sleep disorder. set in 2007 in North Haverbrook, a city heavily polluted, Jack lives as a person with no aspiring dreams or objectives. https://www.fictionpress.com/s/3174347/ ... ployee-404 i'd really apreciate any feedback so far its at about 25,000 words with 11 chapters, ill be releasing more as i go _________________ A̬͕͙̦͎̖n̲͖̗d̻͉ ̺ͅth̟̞̘̮͉͇ͅe̲n̰̻̼̻̪̼̯ Xert said, w͇̻̬ẖ̫͈y̝ ̫̳̰͖no͉ͅt? so it was, b͍̳u̫͖̞̣t̹̠ ̤̻̥̼̱͇t̻̮͇̳̦̼̱h̘̫͚͈̝͎̰en it fucked up. ͉b͓̣̙ͅut̰ ̮̬̹t̖he̫ṇ a̟̬͉̜̝̰͔ga̖̝̬in, what doesn't fuck ̮up a͉̖̠r͕̙͕͈o̫̗̯un̠͇̮̝͇d here? |
| Sat Jan 04, 2014 9:53 am |
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 Joined: Sat Sep 15, 2012 5:23 pm Posts: 294 Location: The Canadas
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Re: For you book critics out there, or book afictionados Will read.
Sounds cool as of now, though. What genre would you classify it as? _________________ *giggle* |
| Sat Jan 04, 2014 6:43 pm |
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Admin Joined: Wed May 22, 2013 9:02 am Posts: 166 Location: Portugal
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Re: For you book critics out there, or book afictionados _________________ A̬͕͙̦͎̖n̲͖̗d̻͉ ̺ͅth̟̞̘̮͉͇ͅe̲n̰̻̼̻̪̼̯ Xert said, w͇̻̬ẖ̫͈y̝ ̫̳̰͖no͉ͅt? so it was, b͍̳u̫͖̞̣t̹̠ ̤̻̥̼̱͇t̻̮͇̳̦̼̱h̘̫͚͈̝͎̰en it fucked up. ͉b͓̣̙ͅut̰ ̮̬̹t̖he̫ṇ a̟̬͉̜̝̰͔ga̖̝̬in, what doesn't fuck ̮up a͉̖̠r͕̙͕͈o̫̗̯un̠͇̮̝͇d here? |
| Sat Jan 04, 2014 7:26 pm |
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Joined: Sat Sep 15, 2012 5:23 pm Posts: 294 Location: The Canadas
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Re: For you book critics out there, or book afictionados Am reading.
Am enjoying. 1/0 will read more _________________ *giggle* |
| Sun Jan 05, 2014 4:47 pm |
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SMP Moderator  Joined: Mon Nov 15, 2010 8:36 pm Posts: 384
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Re: For you book critics out there, or book afictionados I'm on it man!
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| Mon Jan 06, 2014 6:38 am |
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SMP Moderator  Joined: Fri Sep 28, 2012 3:30 pm Posts: 562 Location: Netherlands
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Re: For you book critics out there, or book afictionados |
| Mon Jan 06, 2014 12:24 pm |
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Admin Joined: Wed May 22, 2013 9:02 am Posts: 166 Location: Portugal
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Re: For you book critics out there, or book afictionados Chapter 12 is out now and 13 will soon be out too, really glad you enjoy it math.
Also sevv, wut? xd _________________ A̬͕͙̦͎̖n̲͖̗d̻͉ ̺ͅth̟̞̘̮͉͇ͅe̲n̰̻̼̻̪̼̯ Xert said, w͇̻̬ẖ̫͈y̝ ̫̳̰͖no͉ͅt? so it was, b͍̳u̫͖̞̣t̹̠ ̤̻̥̼̱͇t̻̮͇̳̦̼̱h̘̫͚͈̝͎̰en it fucked up. ͉b͓̣̙ͅut̰ ̮̬̹t̖he̫ṇ a̟̬͉̜̝̰͔ga̖̝̬in, what doesn't fuck ̮up a͉̖̠r͕̙͕͈o̫̗̯un̠͇̮̝͇d here? |
| Mon Jan 06, 2014 5:54 pm |
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SMP Moderator Joined: Fri Sep 28, 2012 3:30 pm Posts: 562 Location: Netherlands
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Re: For you book critics out there, or book afictionados blind said he was on it man
I post pic of on it man |
| Tue Jan 07, 2014 11:20 am |
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Owner  Joined: Mon Nov 15, 2010 3:05 am Posts: 686 Location: Detroit, Michigan
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Re: For you book critics out there, or book afictionados |
| Tue Jan 07, 2014 2:03 pm |
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Re: For you book critics out there, or book afictionados _________________ "Mascot of apony" -Nighttarga (at some point) (I think it was nighttarga) |
| Tue Jan 07, 2014 6:38 pm |
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