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Nighttarga
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Joined: Wed May 22, 2013 9:02 am Posts: 166 Location: Portugal
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For you book critics out there, or book afictionados
I've been writting a novel, its been a project i've been dedicating myself to recently, its a book called Civil Employee 404. here's the description Jack Hughes, 19 years old, is a young adult in college who suffers from a sleep disorder. set in 2007 in North Haverbrook, a city heavily polluted, Jack lives as a person with no aspiring dreams or objectives. https://www.fictionpress.com/s/3174347/ ... ployee-404i'd really apreciate any feedback so far its at about 25,000 words with 11 chapters, ill be releasing more as i go
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A̬͕͙̦͎̖n̲͖̗d̻͉ ̺ͅth̟̞̘̮͉͇ͅe̲n̰̻̼̻̪̼̯ Xert said, w͇̻̬ẖ̫͈y̝ ̫̳̰͖no͉ͅt? so it was, b͍̳u̫͖̞̣t̹̠ ̤̻̥̼̱͇t̻̮͇̳̦̼̱h̘̫͚͈̝͎̰en it fucked up. ͉b͓̣̙ͅut̰ ̮̬̹t̖he̫ṇ a̟̬͉̜̝̰͔ga̖̝̬in, what doesn't fuck ̮up a͉̖̠r͕̙͕͈o̫̗̯un̠͇̮̝͇d here?
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Sat Jan 04, 2014 9:53 am |
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Mathgeek007
Joined: Sat Sep 15, 2012 5:23 pm Posts: 294 Location: The Canadas
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Re: For you book critics out there, or book afictionados
Will read.
Sounds cool as of now, though.
What genre would you classify it as?
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Sat Jan 04, 2014 6:43 pm |
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Nighttarga
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Joined: Wed May 22, 2013 9:02 am Posts: 166 Location: Portugal
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Re: For you book critics out there, or book afictionados
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A̬͕͙̦͎̖n̲͖̗d̻͉ ̺ͅth̟̞̘̮͉͇ͅe̲n̰̻̼̻̪̼̯ Xert said, w͇̻̬ẖ̫͈y̝ ̫̳̰͖no͉ͅt? so it was, b͍̳u̫͖̞̣t̹̠ ̤̻̥̼̱͇t̻̮͇̳̦̼̱h̘̫͚͈̝͎̰en it fucked up. ͉b͓̣̙ͅut̰ ̮̬̹t̖he̫ṇ a̟̬͉̜̝̰͔ga̖̝̬in, what doesn't fuck ̮up a͉̖̠r͕̙͕͈o̫̗̯un̠͇̮̝͇d here?
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Sat Jan 04, 2014 7:26 pm |
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Mathgeek007
Joined: Sat Sep 15, 2012 5:23 pm Posts: 294 Location: The Canadas
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Re: For you book critics out there, or book afictionados
Am reading. Am enjoying.
1/0 will read more
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Sun Jan 05, 2014 4:47 pm |
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TheBlindMan
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Joined: Mon Nov 15, 2010 8:36 pm Posts: 384
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Re: For you book critics out there, or book afictionados
I'm on it man!
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Mon Jan 06, 2014 6:38 am |
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Sevodactyl
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Joined: Fri Sep 28, 2012 3:30 pm Posts: 562 Location: Netherlands
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Mon Jan 06, 2014 12:24 pm |
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Nighttarga
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Joined: Wed May 22, 2013 9:02 am Posts: 166 Location: Portugal
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Re: For you book critics out there, or book afictionados
Chapter 12 is out now and 13 will soon be out too, really glad you enjoy it math.
Also sevv, wut? xd
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A̬͕͙̦͎̖n̲͖̗d̻͉ ̺ͅth̟̞̘̮͉͇ͅe̲n̰̻̼̻̪̼̯ Xert said, w͇̻̬ẖ̫͈y̝ ̫̳̰͖no͉ͅt? so it was, b͍̳u̫͖̞̣t̹̠ ̤̻̥̼̱͇t̻̮͇̳̦̼̱h̘̫͚͈̝͎̰en it fucked up. ͉b͓̣̙ͅut̰ ̮̬̹t̖he̫ṇ a̟̬͉̜̝̰͔ga̖̝̬in, what doesn't fuck ̮up a͉̖̠r͕̙͕͈o̫̗̯un̠͇̮̝͇d here?
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Mon Jan 06, 2014 5:54 pm |
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Sevodactyl
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Joined: Fri Sep 28, 2012 3:30 pm Posts: 562 Location: Netherlands
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Re: For you book critics out there, or book afictionados
blind said he was on it man
I post pic of on it man
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Tue Jan 07, 2014 11:20 am |
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xertimof
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Joined: Mon Nov 15, 2010 3:05 am Posts: 686 Location: Detroit, Michigan
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jedude
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Joined: Mon Nov 15, 2010 3:30 pm Posts: 665
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Re: For you book critics out there, or book afictionados
_________________ "Mascot of apony" -Nighttarga (at some point) (I think it was nighttarga)
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Tue Jan 07, 2014 6:38 pm |
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